Thursday, June 14, 2007
Describing the Chart
It can be seen from the chart that the popular extent of four different kinds of newspapers to the readers. This statistical chart is finished according to a market investigation report.There are totally one thousand effective questionnaires.From the chart, we can see newspaper A are the most popular one.It got four hundred and twenty ballot tickets.The next one is newapaper D,it got two hundred tickets.The third one is newapaper C, it got one hundred and fifty tickets.The last one is newspaper B, it got one hundred and twenty tickets. And then there are still small number people reading the other kinds of newspapers.We can see that there are a big distinction from newspaperA and the others. Newspaper A won a lot of tickets in this research. It must possess good factors to catch the readers' attention.
Next,we can't see the readers's age from the chart. Maybe the satistical figures will be very different according to the different readers' age. So,if the investigator can also analyse the readers' age, that would be more completely acceptable by most people.
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Well done! Have a great summer vacation!
It can be seen from the chart that the popular extent of four different kinds of newspapers to the readers.
-->The chart shows the popularity of four ....among readers.
From the chart, we can see newspaper A are the most popular one.It got four hundred and twenty ballot tickets.
->is the most popular one. It received...
-->got 比較非正式
The next one is newapaper D,it got two hundred tickets.
-->...newpaper D, with two hundred ...
The third one is newapaper C, it got one hundred and fifty tickets.
-->...newspaper C. It received...
And then there are still small number people reading the other kinds of newspapers.
-->there is a small number of people...other kinds of ...
-->the other 指的是 二選一
(one is... the other is...)
We can see that there are a big distinction from newspaperA and the others.
-->these is a ...
Newspaper A won a lot of tickets in this research. It must possess good factors to catch the readers' attention.
-->The reason why Newpaper A was the most popular newspaper may be...
Next,we can't see the readers's age from the chart. Maybe the satistical figures will be very different according to the different readers' age.
-->However, age is not shown on the chart.
So,if the investigator can also analyse the readers' age, that would be more completely acceptable by most people.
-->the results may be more useful.
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It can be seen from the chart that the popular extent of four different kinds of newspapers to the readers.
-->The chart shows the popularity of four ....among readers.
From the chart, we can see newspaper A are the most popular one.It got four hundred and twenty ballot tickets.
->is the most popular one. It received...
-->got 比較非正式
The next one is newapaper D,it got two hundred tickets.
-->...newpaper D, with two hundred ...
The third one is newapaper C, it got one hundred and fifty tickets.
-->...newspaper C. It received...
And then there are still small number people reading the other kinds of newspapers.
-->there is a small number of people...other kinds of ...
-->the other 指的是 二選一
(one is... the other is...)
We can see that there are a big distinction from newspaperA and the others.
-->these is a ...
Newspaper A won a lot of tickets in this research. It must possess good factors to catch the readers' attention.
-->The reason why Newpaper A was the most popular newspaper may be...
Next,we can't see the readers's age from the chart. Maybe the satistical figures will be very different according to the different readers' age.
-->However, age is not shown on the chart.
So,if the investigator can also analyse the readers' age, that would be more completely acceptable by most people.
-->the results may be more useful.
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