Sunday, January 14, 2007
The Internet really benefit people's life
Nowadays the interent is getting more and more common on people's life. If you compare the life with several years ago, you can see how different they are. People's life has been benefited on many kinds of daily things,for example on shopping, communication, and business.
First of all is on shopping.Shopping has become more convenient now.For instances, you don't have to go out for shopping. Just stay at home ,make a list,and turn on the computer, choose the suitable websites, then compare the different brands of products and the prices. If you have decided, just point out what you want to buy, and your products will be sent to your home very soon. It is very easy and convenient, is'nt it?
Not only on shopping, but also on communication are benefited by the internet.Everybody knows that communication is very important on people's relationship.For instance, people who keep in touch very often with their friends must have good friendsip. On the other hand, if people seldom connect with each other ,the relationship must be ended one day.But people in this society are all very busy,and don't have much time to make friends and keep the friendship. In this situation ,the internet can solve this problem.We can use email or MSN to communicate with each other. It save time and also save money. Therefore the interent has become a popular place to meet people. Many people have successfully met their new friends and kept in touch by the internet.
Business is also a good illustration of using the internet to be benefited.Businessmen are all very busy.There is an old saying:"Time is money",so saving time can make much more money.The interent can help businessmen save time.For example,getting on line can help businessmen find many kinds of information easily.And they can use email or MSN to deal with the business letter and the orders for goods during a very short time. Furthermore the businessmen can have the teleconference with the people who are far away from them.That's why the internet is really well liked by the businessmen.
The internet has brought a lot of convenience for us.It is so populer and easy to use,therefore more and more people are depending on the internet in their daily life. No matter old people, young people ,or the children all like to use it .The internet really benefit people's life.
First of all is on shopping.Shopping has become more convenient now.For instances, you don't have to go out for shopping. Just stay at home ,make a list,and turn on the computer, choose the suitable websites, then compare the different brands of products and the prices. If you have decided, just point out what you want to buy, and your products will be sent to your home very soon. It is very easy and convenient, is'nt it?
Not only on shopping, but also on communication are benefited by the internet.Everybody knows that communication is very important on people's relationship.For instance, people who keep in touch very often with their friends must have good friendsip. On the other hand, if people seldom connect with each other ,the relationship must be ended one day.But people in this society are all very busy,and don't have much time to make friends and keep the friendship. In this situation ,the internet can solve this problem.We can use email or MSN to communicate with each other. It save time and also save money. Therefore the interent has become a popular place to meet people. Many people have successfully met their new friends and kept in touch by the internet.
Business is also a good illustration of using the internet to be benefited.Businessmen are all very busy.There is an old saying:"Time is money",so saving time can make much more money.The interent can help businessmen save time.For example,getting on line can help businessmen find many kinds of information easily.And they can use email or MSN to deal with the business letter and the orders for goods during a very short time. Furthermore the businessmen can have the teleconference with the people who are far away from them.That's why the internet is really well liked by the businessmen.
The internet has brought a lot of convenience for us.It is so populer and easy to use,therefore more and more people are depending on the internet in their daily life. No matter old people, young people ,or the children all like to use it .The internet really benefit people's life.
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Nowadays the interent is getting more and more common on people's life.
-->in people's life
If you compare the life with several years ago, you can see how different they are.
-->life now with that several years ago...
People's life has been benefited on many kinds of daily things,for example on shopping, communication, and business.
-->has been benefited because of the Internet on many ways, for example, ...
First of all is on shopping.
-->make a complete sentence
-->First of all, one of the greatest benefits the Internet has brought to modern people is the way...
Shopping has become more convenient now.For instances, you don't have to go out for shopping. Just stay at home ,make a list,and turn on the computer, choose the suitable websites, then compare the different brands of products and the prices.
-->This part is very good!
If you have decided, just point out what you want to buy, and your products will be sent to your home very soon.
-->pount out-->click
Not only on shopping, but also on communication are benefited by the internet.
-->Not only shopping, but also communication....
Everybody knows that communication is very important on people's relationship.For instance, people who keep in touch very often with their friends must have good friendsip. On the other hand, if people seldom connect with each other ,the relationship must be ended one day.
-->Good!
-->the relationship will fade away one day.
But people in this society are all very busy,and don't have much time to make friends and keep the friendship. In this situation ,the internet can solve this problem.We can use email or MSN to communicate with each other. It save time and also save money.
-->Good!
-->It saves...
Therefore the interent has become a popular place to meet people. Many people have successfully met their new friends and kept in touch by the internet.
-->Good!
Business is also a good illustration of using the internet to be benefited.
-->a good illustration of benefits ...
Businessmen are all very busy.There is an old saying:"Time is money",so saving time can make much more money.The interent can help businessmen save time.For example,getting on line can help businessmen find many kinds of information easily.And they can use email or MSN to deal with the business letter and the orders for goods during a very short time. Furthermore the businessmen can have the teleconference with the people who are far away from them.That's why the internet is really well liked by the businessmen.
-->Good!
The internet has brought a lot of convenience for us.It is so populer and easy to use,therefore more and more people are depending on the internet in their daily life. No matter old people, young people ,or the children all like to use it .The internet really benefit people's life.
-->The Internet (officially, capitalize the letter i for Internet)
Great job! Fluent, clear, and well organized. You are also using the transition words and exemplifing expressions well!
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-->in people's life
If you compare the life with several years ago, you can see how different they are.
-->life now with that several years ago...
People's life has been benefited on many kinds of daily things,for example on shopping, communication, and business.
-->has been benefited because of the Internet on many ways, for example, ...
First of all is on shopping.
-->make a complete sentence
-->First of all, one of the greatest benefits the Internet has brought to modern people is the way...
Shopping has become more convenient now.For instances, you don't have to go out for shopping. Just stay at home ,make a list,and turn on the computer, choose the suitable websites, then compare the different brands of products and the prices.
-->This part is very good!
If you have decided, just point out what you want to buy, and your products will be sent to your home very soon.
-->pount out-->click
Not only on shopping, but also on communication are benefited by the internet.
-->Not only shopping, but also communication....
Everybody knows that communication is very important on people's relationship.For instance, people who keep in touch very often with their friends must have good friendsip. On the other hand, if people seldom connect with each other ,the relationship must be ended one day.
-->Good!
-->the relationship will fade away one day.
But people in this society are all very busy,and don't have much time to make friends and keep the friendship. In this situation ,the internet can solve this problem.We can use email or MSN to communicate with each other. It save time and also save money.
-->Good!
-->It saves...
Therefore the interent has become a popular place to meet people. Many people have successfully met their new friends and kept in touch by the internet.
-->Good!
Business is also a good illustration of using the internet to be benefited.
-->a good illustration of benefits ...
Businessmen are all very busy.There is an old saying:"Time is money",so saving time can make much more money.The interent can help businessmen save time.For example,getting on line can help businessmen find many kinds of information easily.And they can use email or MSN to deal with the business letter and the orders for goods during a very short time. Furthermore the businessmen can have the teleconference with the people who are far away from them.That's why the internet is really well liked by the businessmen.
-->Good!
The internet has brought a lot of convenience for us.It is so populer and easy to use,therefore more and more people are depending on the internet in their daily life. No matter old people, young people ,or the children all like to use it .The internet really benefit people's life.
-->The Internet (officially, capitalize the letter i for Internet)
Great job! Fluent, clear, and well organized. You are also using the transition words and exemplifing expressions well!
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