Wednesday, November 01, 2006

 

Toys have lots of possitive impacts on children's learning

Children like toys very much. Since the moment children are able to play with the toys,they get the toys day by day from parents, relatives,friends and other people.Getting toys has become the happiest moment. Many parents just know their children like toys. But very few parents would think about why children like the toys so much and what impacts can the toys give to the children?
Parents certainly agreen with that children's learning is very important.Even lots of parents send their children go to preschool or learning center to study at the very early age. But how do the children learn?Are they really interested in learning ?After all,they are still very young. Although they are curious in lots of things, they do'nt have enough patience and attention to learn.Under this situation learning meterial and learning methods are more important. Toys can be a very good learning meterials . Teachers or parents can teach children through playing with toys. When children see toys, they just think that they are going to have fun with toys.Toys make children's learning more wonderful and motive children to learn.If children are interested in the learning meterial, they can keep more attention in learning. So I always think that toys have lots of possitive impacts on children's learning.

Comments:
Every children likes toys very much.
-->Children like...


Since they can play with the toys,they get the toys day by day from parents, relatives,friends and other people.
-->Since the moment children are able to play...,...

Getting toys has become their happiest time.
-->the happiest moment



Parents certainly agreen with that children's learning is very important.
-->agree with the view that...

Even lots of parents let their children go to preschool or learning center to study at the very early age.
-->...send their children...



Toys can be a very good meterials to learn.
-->learning materials


Teachers or parents can teach children very well by toys.
-->can teach children through playing with toys.

When children see toys, they just think that they are going to have fun with toys.Toys make children's learning more wonderful and inspire children's learhing motive.
-->motive children to learn
 
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