Monday, November 20, 2006

 

Many Factors Can Influence Children's Learning

Children are just like the sponge. They absorb all of the things which are around them.In another words, they keep going on learning by seeing, touching, smelling, and hearing. However, they are still very young. They don't know what they have to learn and what they shouldn't learn. Therefore, many factors can inflence children's learning. And the most important ones are toys, books, and TV.

First, Toys are very attractive to children. Every child likes toys very much.Many parents just know their children like toys, but very few parents would think about why children like toys so much? Actually toys are not only for entainment to children. They can have pasitive impacts on children's learning. Parents must agree with that children's learning is very important.But, how do children learn? They are still so young, they can't pay attention to one thing for a long time. Under this situation, toys can be a very good learning meterial.When children see the toys, they must be very happy to learn.Toys can make children's learning more wonderful and motive children to learn. In this way, children can get better learning results.

Not only toys, "books" is also an important factor on children's learning. Before attending school, children are learning by listening and speaking. After attending school, they start to learn by reading. They have lot's of chances to touch ,play and use the books. At the same time , children begin to obtain knowledge and information from the books.Therefore, books become benefical tools for children's learning, expecially picture books. Good pictures with interesting stories can inspire children's curiosity and explore the imagination. In addition, the lovely illustrations can help cultivate children's sense of aesthetics. Good books provide inspiration, entertainment, information, and knoweldge. They are good for children, aren't they?

Last but not least, "TV" is also one of the important factors. Many people (not only children) spend much time watching TV every day. It provides very common, eazy, and convenient entainment, expecially for the busy, lazy people. Adults use remote control very often, no exception to children. In another words, children can watch TV programs very easily. Under this situation, they have absorbed probably all the ideas from TV no matter they are suitable for them or not. And what we worry about is that children still haven't enough ability to distiguish right or wrong.So the quality of TV programs are more important.If parents and teachers can choose the programs carefully for children ,TV is also a good helper for children's learning.

We all know children's learning is very important, but we also understand children are just children.They are still very young.They have malleability and can be malleabled very easily. At this point,we can image they are influnced very easily druing the age when they are learning. If parents and teachers can spend more time to accompany children to learn, toys, books and TV can have lots of possitive impacts on their learning.

Comments:
Well done! Your essay is well organized.

Some comments:

Let me talk about toys first.
-->You are not giving a speech here, but writing an essay. It is better if the expression can be more formal.

passitive-->positive


Toys can make children's learning be more wonderful and motive children to learn.
-->...can make...more wonderful...



attending to school
-->attending school

http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=4723&dict=CALD

Therefore, books become benefical tools for children's learning. Expecially picture books, good picture books' interesting stories can inspire children's curiosity and explore the imagination.
-->...for children'g leanring, especially pircutre books. Good pictures with interesting storis ...


In addition, the lovely illustrations can make the children appreiate beauty.
-->can help cultivate childrn's sense of aesthetics.
-->Perhaps you can discuss a bit more about the use of pictures in enhancing word/picutre acquisition/recognisition?

Books can make children get lot's of enery on learning, isn't it?
--> Good books provide inspiration, entertainment, information, and knoweldge. They are good for children, aren't they?


It's a very common, eazy, convenient, entainment,
--> coherence!!
-->common (adj), easy (adj), convenient (adj), entertainment (noun)...
-->you can change the sentence into: it provides very common, easy, and convenient entertainment



Adults use remote control very often, no exception to children.
-->There is no exception...


all of the idea from TV no matter what is suitable or not.
-->all the ideas...


no matter what is suitable or not
-->no matter they are suitable for them or not.



We all know children's learning is very important, but we also understand children are just children.They are still very young.They have plasticity and can be plasticed very easily.
-->mallebility
-->can be malleabled ...

At this point,we can image they are influnced very easily druing they are learning.
-->during the age when...



If parents and teachers can spend more time to accompany children to learn, toys, books and TV can have lots of possitive impacts on their learning. -->good ending!
 
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