Monday, September 25, 2006
Introduce myself
Hello,everybody:
My name is Maggie. I live in Tainan city. I have graducated from university for almost twenty years.After graducating,I have worked at primary schools and cram schools.Although my major was not English department ,I am very interested in English. I always want to improve my English,but I was very busy in my job ,taking care of my child,and doing a lot of houseworks.I still didn't have much time to study English.
This summer vacation I make a big decision to quit my job.I want to do what I enjoy to do while I am "still young".At the same time I can have more free time to accompany my child.
I am really glad to have the chance to be here,in the meantime , I also got a little pressure.My computer ability is not so good . Besides,improving English, I still have to enhance my computer ability especially the typing speed .
Anyway I will make an effort and do my best in this class. I expect my English will be getting better and better.
My name is Maggie. I live in Tainan city. I have graducated from university for almost twenty years.After graducating,I have worked at primary schools and cram schools.Although my major was not English department ,I am very interested in English. I always want to improve my English,but I was very busy in my job ,taking care of my child,and doing a lot of houseworks.I still didn't have much time to study English.
This summer vacation I make a big decision to quit my job.I want to do what I enjoy to do while I am "still young".At the same time I can have more free time to accompany my child.
I am really glad to have the chance to be here,in the meantime , I also got a little pressure.My computer ability is not so good . Besides,improving English, I still have to enhance my computer ability especially the typing speed .
Anyway I will make an effort and do my best in this class. I expect my English will be getting better and better.
# posted by linwayrong @ 4:29 PM 
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Well done!
Here are some suggestions for you:
1.But I was very busy in my job ,taking care of my child,and doing a lot of houseworks.
-->Avoid starting a sentece with 'but'. You can connect this sentence with the previous one with a comma (,).
2. look forward to + Ving
-->look forward to doing
see the useage of 'look forward to': http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=47169&dict=CALD
In this sentence, you may use another word, e.g., enjoy.
3. Coming here to study I am really glad
-->I am relly glad to have the chance to...
4.Improving English,besides, I still have to enhance my computer ability especially the typing speed .
-->Besides improving..., I still..., especially ...
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Here are some suggestions for you:
1.But I was very busy in my job ,taking care of my child,and doing a lot of houseworks.
-->Avoid starting a sentece with 'but'. You can connect this sentence with the previous one with a comma (,).
2. look forward to + Ving
-->look forward to doing
see the useage of 'look forward to': http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=47169&dict=CALD
In this sentence, you may use another word, e.g., enjoy.
3. Coming here to study I am really glad
-->I am relly glad to have the chance to...
4.Improving English,besides, I still have to enhance my computer ability especially the typing speed .
-->Besides improving..., I still..., especially ...
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