Tuesday, October 17, 2006
Having A Party
*Date:This Saturday
*Time:8:00 p.m.
*Place:At my house
My son's (Jimmy) birthday is coming on this Saturday.We sincerly invite you and your children to join the party.
It's very easy to find the location.Follow these direction to get to our house.They will lead you from train station to our house by car.
From the front door of the train station, along Beei Men Road,you will pass Second Junior High School.And please go ahead for about two or three minutes, then across Charng Rong Road you will see the Seven-Eleven is on the corner.You should prepare to stop.On the right side,you will see a lot of apartment buildings there. It is "Dah Daw New City Apartment Houses Area one"This is the place.Please park the car on the basement garage, then take elevator of " D building "to 5F.Push the doorbell,We'll be right there waiting for you.
We really hope that you will come.You don't have to worry about what to bring. We'll prepare somethings to eat and drink.Just don't forget to bring your children here.My son really look forward to seeing his "old friends" come and play with him.
Maggie and Jason
*Time:8:00 p.m.
*Place:At my house
My son's (Jimmy) birthday is coming on this Saturday.We sincerly invite you and your children to join the party.
It's very easy to find the location.Follow these direction to get to our house.They will lead you from train station to our house by car.
From the front door of the train station, along Beei Men Road,you will pass Second Junior High School.And please go ahead for about two or three minutes, then across Charng Rong Road you will see the Seven-Eleven is on the corner.You should prepare to stop.On the right side,you will see a lot of apartment buildings there. It is "Dah Daw New City Apartment Houses Area one"This is the place.Please park the car on the basement garage, then take elevator of " D building "to 5F.Push the doorbell,We'll be right there waiting for you.
We really hope that you will come.You don't have to worry about what to bring. We'll prepare somethings to eat and drink.Just don't forget to bring your children here.My son really look forward to seeing his "old friends" come and play with him.
Maggie and Jason
# posted by linwayrong @ 12:15 AM 
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1. My son,Jimmy,his birthday is coming on this Saturday.
-->My son's (Jimmy) birthday...
2.invite you and your children coming and joining the party.
-->invite ... to...
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=41876&dict=CALD
3.From the front door of the train station,along Beei Men Road,pass Second Junior High School,go ahead for about two or three minutes, then across Charng Rong Road you will see the Seven-Eleven is on the corner.
-->This is a very long sentence. Give your readers a break!
-->. You will...
4.expect
his "old friends" come and play with him.
-->expect...to...
It is better to use 'look forward to + Ving'
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-->My son's (Jimmy) birthday...
2.invite you and your children coming and joining the party.
-->invite ... to...
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=41876&dict=CALD
3.From the front door of the train station,along Beei Men Road,pass Second Junior High School,go ahead for about two or three minutes, then across Charng Rong Road you will see the Seven-Eleven is on the corner.
-->This is a very long sentence. Give your readers a break!
-->. You will...
4.expect
his "old friends" come and play with him.
-->expect...to...
It is better to use 'look forward to + Ving'
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